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Choose one that you like chocolate, ice cream or candies why?

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I will choose ice cream among chocolate, ice cream and candies. The reason is that the weather is swelter these days so there is nothing like ice cream in this weather. It is freezing so eating ice cream is one of great ways to beat the heat. Besides, ice cream is quite soft, I can feel great when it is melting slowly in my mouth. Chocolate and candies taste sweet and good but they are hard as well as not cold. That is why there is nothing better than ice cream as desert.

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Hi Scott!

Happy Friday! See you on Monday ^^

T. DON

I will choose ice cream among chocolate, ice cream and candies. The reason is that the weather is swelter these days so there is nothing like ice cream in this weather. It is freezing so eating ice cream is one of great ways to beat the heat. Besides, ice cream is quite soft, I can feel great when it is melting slowly in my mouth. Chocolate and candies taste sweet and good but they are hard as well as not cold. That is why there is nothing better than ice cream as desert.

>> I will choose an ice cream among chocolate, ice cream and candies. The reason is that the weather is sweltering these days so there is nothing to beat an ice cream in this weather. It is freezing so eating an ice cream is one of great ways to beat the heat. Besides, an ice cream is quite soft, I can feel great when it is melting slowly in my mouth. Chocolate and candies taste sweet and good but they are hard as well and not cold. That is why there is nothing better than an ice cream as desert.
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