¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÁÖ*¿¬
2023-08-04 2414

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Q: What is the main problem faced by your hometown?
A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child's education, and so on. The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie



Q: What is the main problem faced by your hometown?
A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child's education, and so on.
>> 
The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live and actually work in Seoul. It is a semi-mandatory kind of work place with good child education system, and so on.
The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.
>>  
The other one is that the cost of houses is getting high for the same reason.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
127908 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 1
127907 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 1
127906 Monday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 852
127905 Homework ¿ì*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 817
127904 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 845
127903 May 1, 2023 ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 856
127902 homework 05.01 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 881
127901 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 3
127900 Writing task ¾È*Çü ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 886
127899 4/28 homework °­*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 2
127898 5.1 homework ±Ç*¸² ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 1119
127897 teenagers ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 681
127896 Essay ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 665
127895 The biggest change how families are in Korea ¼º*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-05-01 806
127894 When do you prefer having a family gathering? ±¸*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 0
127893 I think there are many merits if students wear a uniform of the... ÀÌ*¿õ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 1
127892 How often should a person travel and why? ¹®*¿í ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 1035
127891 have you ever taken any diet supplements? ¹®*¿í ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 798
127890 homework ½Å*ÈÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 908
127889 What do you think is the i ded he ight for men in Korea? Why? ¿À*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2023-04-30 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04