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Q: What is the main problem faced by your hometown?
A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child's education, and so on. The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.

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Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie



Q: What is the main problem faced by your hometown?
A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child's education, and so on.
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The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live and actually work in Seoul. It is a semi-mandatory kind of work place with good child education system, and so on.
The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.
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The other one is that the cost of houses is getting high for the same reason.
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