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How can pets contribute to the overall well-being and development of people?

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I personally think Yes, it's possible. Nowadays, as many people live alone, there are more people who have pets. Let imagine the situation when you get off from work, you're going back to your home with a tired body. And your pet always welcome you with a smile. That's enough to get rid of your fatigue. So, I strongly agree with that.

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Great answer, Eric! Thank you for always outdoing yourself in class. I commend your thoughts from the very beginning! Keep it up!
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A: I personally think Yes, it's possible. Nowadays, as many people live alone, there are more people who have pets. Let imagine the situation when you get off from work, you're going back to your home with a tired body. And your pet always welcome you with a smile. That's enough to get rid of your fatigue. So, I strongly agree with that.
>> I think Yes, it's possible. Nowadays, as many people live alone, more people have pets. Let's imagine the situation when you get off from work, you're going back to your home with a tired body. And your pet always welcomes you with a smile. That's enough to get rid of your fatigue. So, I strongly agree with that.
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