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The importance of team work

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The trait of my work, i believe effectively teamwork is important for winning over the war. I always work with my team. To enhance teamwork, we always have training. In any situation, we have to survive and win over the enemy. To do that, we have to be honest to our team and not to be selfish. During my college, i was always taught this valuable lesson.

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Hi, Jun! Hopefully, you will always be safe and your country from adversaries.-Faith-
The trait of my work, i believe effectively teamwork is important for winning over the war. 
>> In the nature of my work, I believe teamwork is important for winning a war. 
I always work with my team. 
>> CORRECT
To enhance teamwork, we always have training. 
>> CORRECT
In any situation, we have to survive and win over the enemy. 
>> CORRECT
OR We have to survive and be victorious come what may.
To do that, we have to be honest to our team and not to be selfish. 
>> CORRECT
During my college, i was always taught this valuable lesson.
>> During my college, I was always taught this valuable lesson.
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