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Q: What is your hometown known for?
A: My hometown Seoul is the capital of South Korea. This city is very vibrant and bustling wherever I go. It's renowned for several things include modern skyscrappers, advanced technology, and so on.
At same time, various traces of old hystory are found all over the Seoul like palace, traditional town, and something in such a small alley. Because Seoul has very long hystories for thousands years repeating destroyed and reconstructed. I enjoy being there feeling blood, sweat, struggle, effort, and long hours of countless people.

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Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it¡¯s 

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Q: What is your hometown known for?
A: My hometown Seoul is the capital of South Korea.
>> GREAT!
This city is very vibrant and bustling wherever I go.
>> CORRECT!
It's renowned for several things include modern skyscrapers, advanced technology, and so on.
>> It's renowned for several things including modern skyscrapers, advanced technology, and so on.
At same time, various traces of old hystory are found all over the Seoul like palace, traditional town, and something in such a small alley.
>> At the same time, various traces of history are found all over Seoul like a palace, a traditional town, and a small old alley.
Because Seoul has very long hystories for thousands years repeating destroyed and reconstructed.
>> Seoul has a very long history and for thousands of years, it has been damaged and reconstructed repeatedly.
I enjoy being there feeling blood, sweat, struggle, effort, and long hours of countless people.
>> I enjoy being there because it makes me realize the blood, sweat, struggle, effort, and long hours sacrificed by countless people.
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