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Why is English fluency significant for you?

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Imagine you are communcating with a businessman. One of the most important things to be succeed on the conversation is how fast a person can understand on your explaination. Time is the most considerable feature that business can maximize its profit. Longer gap of conversation leads not only to exhaust easily but also to lose confidence on the business. Regarding to the circumstance, effective communcation cannot be missing on the business relationship that can create a full potential of company's surplus. This situation is that I am going to face on this October. Hundreds of international furniture suppliers are going to set appointment for a new promotion and I who have a responsibility on deliver both English and Korean. I believe that I can be more confident on speaking English with my tutor, Ms. Beth :)

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Thank you for this Myeong Ha! I will help you in any way I can. Good luck!

Imagine you are communicating with a businessman. 
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One of the most important things to be succeed on the conversation is how fast a person can understand on your explaination. 
>>One of the most important things to be successful in the conversation is how fast a person can understand your explanation. 
>>> OR: One of the most important things to have a successful conversation is how fast a person can understand your explanation. 
Time is the most considerable feature that business can maximize its profit. 
>>> Time is the most considerable factor where business can maximize its profit. 
Longer gap of conversation leads not only to exhaust easily but also to lose confidence on the business. 
>>Longer gap of conversation leads not only to being exhausted easily but also to lose confidence in the business. 
Regarding to the circumstance, effective communcation cannot be missing on the business relationship that can create a full potential of company's surplus. 
>>Regarding the circumstance, effective communication cannot be missing in the business relationship which can create a full potential on the company's surplus. 
This situation is that I am going to face on this October. 
>>> This situation is what I am going to face in this October. 
Hundreds of international furniture suppliers are going to set appointment for a new promotion and I who have a responsibility on deliver both English and Korean.
>>> Hundreds of international furniture suppliers are going to set an appointment for a new promotion and I have a responsibility on delivering both English and Korean.
 I believe that I can be more confident on speaking English with my tutor, Ms. Beth :)
>>>  I believe that I can be more confident in speaking English with my tutor, Ms. Beth :)
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