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Hello, T.Faith.
Did you enjoy your weekend?
Suddenly, some question came up to me.
Is Faith your real name?
If not, why did you choose the name?
Anyway, I spent my weekend doing usual things.
There were nothing special at the clinic.
After I finished my work, I ate a dinner with my wife, and then I played Nintendo with my daughters.
Last night, my wife and I watched a horror movie.
That movie was so boring though.
Meanwhile, water plant in our fish tank grew up, so we filled the tank with enough water.
I ordered more stuff for our tank.
The fish tank will become more beautiful in a few weeks, I guess.
Tomorrow will be a hectic day.
That's because I have to finish calculating monthly income and expense.
I should go to bed earlier than usual tonight.
If I know a pros and cons about something, I can analyze the process and expect what it will be.
Knowing disadvantages is crucial before I made a decision.
When I am not sure if it is good or not, I usually do it.
What about you?
See you.

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Good morning, Dr. Kim! How refreshing it is knowing about the progress of your fish tank! I would like you to know that I personally chose my name 'Faith' because as a Christian, I have to constantly remind myself that I must have faith in God. In addition, when it comes to making big decisions, I always carefully plan it, so I make sure to see all the pros and cons of it.-Faith-
Hello, T.Faith.
>> Hello, T. Faith.
Did you enjoy your weekend?
>> CORRECT
Suddenly, some question came up to me.
>> Suddenly, some questions came up to me.
Is Faith your real name?
>> Is 'Faith' your real name?
If not, why did you choose the name?
>> CORRECT
OR If not, why did you choose it?
Anyway, I spent my weekend doing usual things
.
>> CORRECT
There were nothing special at the clinic.
>> There was nothing special at the clinic.
After I finished my work, I ate a dinner with my wife, and then I played Nintendo with my daughters.
>> After I finished my work, I had dinner with my wife, and then I played Nintendo with my daughters.
Last night, my wife and I watched a horror movie.
>> CORRECT
That movie was so boring though.
>> CORRECT
Meanwhile, water plant in our fish tank grew up, so we filled the tank with enough water.
>> Meanwhile, the water plants in our fish tank grow, so we filled the tank with enough water.
OR Meanwhile, the aquatic plants in our fish tank grow, so we filled the tank with enough water.
I ordered more stuff for our tank.
>> CORRECT
The fish tank will become more beautiful in a few weeks, I guess.
>> CORRECT
Tomorrow will be a hectic day. 
That's because I have to finish calculating monthly income and expense.
>> Tomorrow will be a hectic day because I have to finish calculating our monthly income and expense.
I should go to bed earlier than usual tonight.
>> CORRECT
If I know a pros and cons about something, I can analyze the process and expect what it will be.
>> If I knew the pros and cons of something, I would analyze the process and expect what it will be.
Knowing disadvantages is crucial before I made a decision.
>> Knowing the disadvantages is crucial before I make a decision.
When I am not sure if it is good or not, I usually do it.
>> CORRECT
What about you?
>> CORRECT
See you.
>> CORRECT
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