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I think no.

작성자: 윤*혜
2023-07-28 1156

회원님의 영작문

No.
I think it would be more right to express it in other languages than in other languages.
The geeks I think are people who think of things that other people can't come up with.
But the people I've seen in the field of technology seem to be people who are trying to make what most people think into technology.
Therefore, the words used are often different, but I think the words and thoughts are similar.
For example, doctors talk in technical terms, or teachers use words that are easy for children to understand.
It looks like a difficult conversation at first glance using technical terms, but when I interpret the content, I didn't see it as a weirdo because it's not that different from anyone else.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Da Hye,

I want to appreciate your effort in completing your homework. You've done a great job expressing your thoughts and ideas. I liked how you discussed different perspectives on language and technology. Your insights about geeks and people in the field of technology were really interesting. You showed a good understanding of how language can vary in different contexts, like doctors using technical terms and teachers using simpler words. Keep up the excellent work, and I'm proud of your hard work and creativity!

~Teacher Cathy


No.

>>CORRECT

I think it would be more right to express it in other languages than in other languages.

>>I think it would be more appropriate to express it in one language than in multiple languages.
The geeks I think are people who think of things that other people can't come up with.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe that geeks are people who come up with ideas that others can't think of.
But the people I've seen in the field of technology seem to be people who are trying to make what most people think into technology.

>>However, the people I've seen in the field of technology appear to be individuals who turn common ideas into technology.
Therefore, the words used are often different, but I think the words and thoughts are similar.

>>CORRECT

OR>>As a result, the words used may often be different, but I think the thoughts and ideas are similar.
For example, doctors talk in technical terms, or teachers use words that are easy for children to understand.

>>CORRECT

OR>>For instance, doctors speak in technical terms, while teachers use words that are easy for children to understand.
It looks like a difficult conversation at first glance using technical terms, but when I interpret the content, I didn't see it as a weirdo because it's not that different from anyone else.

>>CORRECT

OR>>At first glance, conversations using technical terms may seem difficult, but when I interpret the content, I didn't find it strange because it's not that different from anyone else.

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