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The advantages of buying your own house in Korea

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2023-07-28 1913

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First, If I have my own house, I can save my money renting a house.
Second is related mental. house price has grown continuously until now. If I have own house, I would feel stability.

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Hi JT!
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See you in class! :)

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First, If I have my own house, I can save my money renting a house.
>> The advantage of buying your own house here in Korea is that you can save more money from renting.
Second is related mental. house price has grown continuously until now. If I have own house, I would feel stability.
>> Since housing prices have grown continuously, having your own house would give you inner peace and stability. 
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