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I am not used to be touched my skin.
So I I don¡¯t like greetings that people who are not close to me touch my body.
Like a greeting with nose or hug.

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Hello there, Ms. Sunny!
We all have our personal space that everyone must be aware of. Some people are not comfortable with first meeting gestures like hugging or even shaking hands so for me, the best greeting is what many Asian countries do, "bow"
Have a good day!
Aki~


I am not used to be touched my skin.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I don't feel comfortable with close body language greetings.

So I don¡¯t like greetings that people who are not close to me touch my body.
>>>  So I don't like those greetings that other people need to touch my body.

Like a greeting with nose or hug.
>>> Like a greeting with a nose or hugging.
>>> Like Hongi ( Maori greeting where  two people pressing their noses together )
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