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Korea\'s Big Companies

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Korea have many big companies.
Obviously, Samsung is first company in Korea.
Usually, big companies has many subsidiary.
For example, Samsung have insurance company, bio company, even they have amuse park.

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Korea have many big companies.
>> Korea has many big companies.
Obviously, Samsung is first company in Korea.
>> Obviously, Samsung is the first company in Korea.
Usually, big companies has many subsidiary.
>> Usually, big companies have many subsidiaries.
For example, Samsung have insurance company, bio company, even they have amuse park.
>> For example, Samsung has an insurance company, a bio company, and even an amusement park.
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