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My biggest fear is pain. A few years ago, I had surgery for a herniated disc and lived proudly, but it was more difficult mentally with great fear and sadness because I couldn't do anything because I was sick.
I realized that only when my body is healthy can I achieve my family, work, and dreams, and I have not neglected health study and exercise.

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Hello Eliana!
I would have to agree with you, unless our body is healthy then we can achieve and do things we want. take good care of yourself and hoping that you will be able to do what you used to do. have a good day!
Aki~

My biggest fear is pain. 
>> CORRECT!

A few years ago, I had surgery for a herniated disc and lived proudly, but it was more difficult mentally with great fear and sadness because I couldn't do anything because I was sick.
>> CORRECT!

I realized that only when my body is healthy can I achieve my family, work, and dreams, and I have not neglected health study and exercise.
>> CORRECT!
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