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HOMEWORK for 07/26
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think is the biggest change with families in your country compared in the past?

I think changed a lot of things
There were usually big familiy in the past but not now and the old people in family have freedom mind than the past

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Good morning, Min Seog! Thank you for always being diligent in answering the homework I'm giving you. We will continue to do our best in improving your skills with the activities that we will do in the class. See you there! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
I think changed a lot of things
>> I think a lot of things has changed.
There were usually big familiy in the past but not now and the old people in family have freedom mind than the past
>> There were usually big families in the past, but not now. 
>> Older people in the family used to think more freely now, than in the past. 
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