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Homework

작성자: 주*연
2023-07-27 1292

회원님의 영작문

Q.Describe the things that you did together with your brother. How often did you spend time together?

A. To be honest, We rarely talk to each other and do together something. The moment that we do together is usually two events.

One is to prepare my mother's birthday. We discussed what present she would like, how much we each are willing to contribute to purchase some item, wheter or not to bring her to go shopping. But, We haven't ever went shopping without my mom. And my mom always say that she doesn't want anything. So, we used to talk using online chat application and buy something online

The other one is having a trip
We usually plan and have a family trip at least once a year. It can be for somebody's birthday or public holiday. While traveling we talked a lot. I think that the time we talk to each other face to face while traveling may longer than other times for 1 year.

In conclusion, we spend time togher for enough time at least twice a year. I hope you don't misunders

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie

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Q.Describe the things that you did together with your brother. How often did you spend time together?
A. To be honest, We rarely talk to each other and do together something.
>> To be honest, We rarely talk to each other or do something together.
The moment that we do together is usually two events.
>> However, there are two usual things we do together whenever we meet.
One is to prepare my mother's birthday.
>> One is preparing for my mother's birthday.
We discussed what present she would like, how much we each are willing to contribute to purchase some item, wheter or not to bring her to go shopping.
>> We discuss what present she would like, how much we are willing to contribute to purchasing some items for her, and whether we would bring her along with us when we shop.
But, We haven't ever went shopping without my mom.
>> But we have never gone shopping without my mom.
And my mom always say that she doesn't want anything.
>>And my mom always says she doesn't want anything.
So, we used to talk using online chat application and buy something online.
>> So we talk though an online chat application and by something for her online.
The other one is having a trip.
>> CORRECT!
We usually plan and have a family trip at least once a year.
>>CORRECT!
It can be for somebody's birthday or public holiday.
>> It can be for somebody's birthday or on a public holiday.
While traveling we talked a lot.
>> We talk a lot while traveling.
I think that the time we talk to each other face to face while traveling may longer than other times for 1 year.
>>I think the conversation we have together face to face while traveling is the longest one we have than any other in a year.
In conclusion, we spend time together for enough time at least twice a year. I hope you don't misunderstand.
>> In conclusion, we spend enough time together at least twice a year. I hope you don't misunderstand.
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