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HOMEWORK for 07/25
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What can you say about the history of your family?


my mothrt was born to gangwondo the korean eastside and my father was born to jeonlado the korean west and south side.
they met in seoul and they were marid.
and I was born in 1996 in seoul. and my brother was born 2008 in seoul.

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Hi, Min Seog! Thank you for sharing something important about your family today. I appreciate all your effort in doing your homework. Let's continue to study even harder in the class. See you there! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
my mothrt was born to gangwondo the korean eastside and my father was born to jeonlado the korean west and south side.
>> My mother was born in Gangwondo, the Korean Eastside, while my father was born in Jeonlado, the West and South side.  
they met in seoul and they were marid.
>> They met in Seoul and got married.
and I was born in 1996 in seoul. and my brother was born 2008 in seoul.
>> I was born in 1996 in Seoul, and my brother was born in 2008, also in Seoul. 
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