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There are many kinds of natural disaster.
An earthquake, typhoon, floods, landslides, etc.
Most case of natural disasters, we can go to safe place so, prevent accidents.
But, case of an earthquake is different.
The reason is that the building able to collapse or land is also can be destroyed by earthquake.
I think humans are like little ants in front of nature.
4 years ago I experience from the small earthquake.
It was a small earthquake, but the feeling was creepy.

- I hope you're safe from the typhoon.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

There are many kinds of natural disaster.
>> There are many kinds of natural disasters.
An earthquake, typhoon, floods, landslides, etc.
>>  There are earthquakes, typhoons, floods, landslides, and others.
Most case of natural disasters, we can go to safe place so, prevent accidents.
>> In most cases of natural disasters, we can go to safe place so to prevent accidents.
But, case of an earthquake is different.
>> But, in the case of an earthquake, it is different.
The reason is that the building able to collapse or land is also can be destroyed by earthquake.
>> The reason is that the building can collapse or land can also be destroyed by earthquake.
I think humans are like little ants in front of nature.
>> CORRECT!
4 years ago I experience from the small earthquake.
>> 4 years ago I experienced a small earthquake.
It was a small earthquake, but the feeling was creepy.
>> CORRECT!


- I hope you're safe from the typhoon.
(Thank you, Keon! Keep safe as well. ~ T. Camille)
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