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How can government and international cooperation play a role in addressing climate change and its im

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Climate change has been met with various interventions, discussions and negotiation at local, regional and global levels. Greenhouse emmissions since the industrial revolutionhave led to the increased warming of the planet. In tackling the climate crisis, it is important to create international policies and institutions as a basis for the reduction of greenhouse emissions. Climate policies should be well-developed at the international level. One of the policies that the presidential nominee suggested is imposeing carbon taxes to the factories if they are over the guidelines. If so, industrial area will try to install the reduction facilities or may develop new technology to produce the minimum carbonization. Conglomerates have already tried to reduce plastics for packaging their products and remove labels on the goods. However, people and major companies, although, put their efforts a lot, major emitters such as China, the USA and India must thak full responsibility in offering contri

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Thank you for this Sir Hwang! We definitely take global warming and climate change seriously since we have been experiencing severe damages brought by natural disasters.

Climate change has been met with various interventions, discussions and negotiation at local, regional and global levels. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: Climate change has been addressed with various interventions, discussions and negotiation at local, regional and global levels. 
Greenhouse emmissions since the industrial revolutionhave led to the increased warming of the planet. 
>>> Greenhouse emissions since the industrial revolution have led to the increased warming of the planet.    
In tackling the climate crisis, it is important to create international policies and institutions as a basis for the reduction of greenhouse emissions. 
>>> correct  
Climate policies should be well-developed at the international level. 
>>>  correct   
One of the policies that the presidential nominee suggested is imposeing carbon taxes to the factories if they are over the guidelines. 
>>>   One of the policies that the presidential nominee suggested is imposing carbon taxes to the factories if they go over the guidelines.
>>> OR: One of the policies that the presidential nominee suggested is imposing carbon taxes to the factories that go beyond the guidelines.
If so, industrial area will try to install the reduction facilities or may develop new technology to produce the minimum carbonization. 
>>>  correct    
Conglomerates have already tried to reduce plastics for packaging their products and remove labels on the goods. 
>>> correct     
However, people and major companies, although, put their efforts a lot, major emitters such as China, the USA and India must thak full responsibility in offering contributions.
>>> However, although people and major companies put a lot of their efforts in it, major emitters such as China, the USA and India must take full responsibility in offering contributions.  
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