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I exercise to improve the quality of life.I think it's most important to stay healthy.

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Hi Jeny,

It's wonderful to see that you not only understand the importance of staying healthy but also genuinely enjoy exercising. By exercising to improve the quality of your life, you are making wise and positive choices. Your passion for staying healthy will not only benefit your body but also bring joy and happiness to your daily routine. Keep up the great work, and continue doing what you love! Your dedication to exercising is inspiring. Take care and stay motivated!

~Teacher Cathy

 

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