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The time when I had a hard time adjusting to change was when I got married and became a housewife, cleaning and organizing the house.
It's hard to organize only my stuff, but I think I need a systematic tendency to organize my husband and children's things, kitchen and living room supplies.
I am a very unsystematic person.
So even now, when things pile up in an unsystematic inclination, I can't organize it and have a mental breakdown, so it's very difficult mentally.

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Good morning, Eliana!
Thank you for this. I understand your situation. As a wife and a mom of two kids, there are a lot of things that seem new to you because they were not part of your life before. hang on, you'll get used to it. haha! There is one thing that helps me to organize things; "song"- ^^
Have a great day
Aki~

The time when I had a hard time adjusting to change was when I got married and became a housewife, cleaning and organizing the house.
>>> CORRECT!

It's hard to organize only my stuff, but I think I need a systematic tendency to organize my husband's and children's things, kitchen, and living room supplies.
>>> CORRECT!

I am a very unsystematic person.
>>> CORRECT!

So even now, when things pile up in an unsystematic inclination, I can't organize it and have a mental breakdown, so it's very difficult mentally.
>>> CORRECT!
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