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Homework

작성자: 김*우
2023-07-24 1745

회원님의 영작문

Hi, there.
It's sunny today after a long time.
That's why there are many patients/clients at the clinic.
Basically, I am busy every Monday, because of many administrative paper work.
Fortunately, it seems that everythings are going to be fine.
Since I read your answer so far, I realized that you are somewhat introvert.
As you know, I am so outgoing.
Now, my clinic are closed, and I am totally exausted.
I love my work, neverthless, sometimes I want to be from my work.
After this writing, I will drive my car without the roof on my way home.
It always makes me feel happy.
Meanwhile, I promised that I would exercise with my wife this evening; going upstairs 26stories.
I am not sure I can do that.
If I was not busy today, I would have had enough energy.
As for my assignment, I don't understand exactly what you mean, I guess.
If I am the mayor of our city, I can help many companies increase their productivity.
And, I can help poor people with the money and the education.
See you tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Don't worry, your answer looks like you clearly understood the homework question, Dr. Kim! You are right, I am an introvert, but most likely an ambivert. I hope you did your exercise well last night. See you!-Faith-
Hi, there.
>> CORRECT
It's sunny today after a long time. That's why there are many patients/clients at the clinic.
>> It's sunny today after a long time that's why there are many patients/clients at the clinic. 
Basically, I am busy every Monday, because of many administrative paper work.
>> Basically, I am busy every Monday because of many administrative paperwork.
Fortunately, it seems that everythings are going to be fine.
>> Fortunately, it seems that everything is going to be fine.
Since I read your answer so far, I realized that you are somewhat introvert.
>> CORRECT
As you know, I am so outgoing.
>> CORRECT
OR Apparently, I am an extrovert.
Now, my clinic are closed, and I am totally exausted.
>> Now, my clinic is closed, and I am totally exhausted.
I love my work, neverthless, sometimes I want to be from my work.
>> I love my work, nevertheless, sometimes I want to be away from my work.
After this writing, I will drive my car without the roof on my way home.
>> CORRECT
OR After writing, I will drive back home with the top down.
It always makes me feel happy.
>> CORRECT
Meanwhile, I promised that I would exercise with my wife this evening; going upstairs 26stories.
>> Meanwhile, I promised that I would exercise with my wife this evening; going up to the 26th floor by the stairs.
I am not sure I can do that.
>> CORRECT
If I was not busy today, I would have had enough energy.
>> CORRECT
As for my assignment, I don't understand exactly what you mean, I guess.
>> CORRECT
If I am the mayor of our city, I can help many companies increase their productivity.
>> If I were the mayor of our city, I could help many companies increase their productivity.
And, I can help poor people with the money and the education.
>> Furthermore, I can help poor people with money and education.
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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