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작성자: 김*우
2023-07-22 2346

회원님의 영작문

Hello, T.Faith.
I wonder what you usually do on weekend.
As you know, I worked at the clinic today also.
Since there were so many patients/clients, I was exausted.
However, I could restore my energy, because of my family.
My wife prepared some delicious food for me, so I enjoyed it.
In addition, I played Nintendo with my daughters.
And then, I ordered many stuff for our new fish tank.
Actually, I plan to make a beautiful fish tank with many fishes and grasses.
After I studied about the evironment of the fish tank, I realized that it is too difficult to set it.
It also requires much responsibility about lives; fish, grass, and bacteria.
I really want to succeed this plan this time.
Now, my wife is reading books for daughters.
After they got sleep, we will enjoy beer and game.
Anyway, I love both of landscape and cityscape.
My house has a brilliant cityview, and I am satisfied with it.
However, I sometimes miss a beatiful landscape which has trees, flowers and birds.
See you next Monday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I am so glad to hear about your happy family time, Dr. Kim! As for me, sometimes I spend my weekend in our hometown with my family, and I just enjoy reading and watching inspirational books at times in my apartment. -Faith-
Hello, T.Faith.
>> Hello, T. Faith.
I wonder what you usually do on weekend.
>> I wonder what you usually do on weekends.
As you know, I worked at the clinic today also.
>> As you know, I work at the clinic today also.
Since there were so many patients/clients, I was exausted.
>> Since there were so many patients/clients, I usually get exhausted.
However, I could restore my energy, because of my family.
>> However, I can restore my energy because of my family.
My wife prepared some delicious food for me, so I enjoyed it.
>> Last weekend, my wife prepared some delicious food for me, so I enjoyed it.
In addition, I played Nintendo with my daughters.
>> CORRECT
And then, I ordered many stuff for our new fish tank.
>> Then, I ordered a lot of stuff for our new fish tank.
Actually, I plan to make a beautiful fish tank with many fishes and grasses.
>> Actually, I planned to make a beautiful fish tank with many different fishes and grasses.
After I studied about the evironment of the fish tank, I realized that it is too difficult to set it.
>> After I studied the environment of the fish tank, I realized that it was too difficult to set it up.
It also requires much responsibility about lives; fish, grass, and bacteria.
>> It also requires much responsibility for some lives; fish, grass, and bacteria.
I really want to succeed this plan this time.
>> I really want this plan to succeed this time.
OR I really want to carry out this plan.
Now, my wife is reading books for daughters.
>> Now, my wife is reading books for our daughters.
After they got sleep, we will enjoy beer and game.
>> After they go to sleep, we will enjoy a beer and a game.
Anyway, I love both of landscape and cityscape.
>> Anyway, I love both landscape and cityscape.
My house has a brilliant cityview, and I am satisfied with it.
>> My house has a brilliant city view, and I am satisfied with it.
However, I sometimes miss a beatiful landscape which has trees, flowers and birds.
>> However, I sometimes miss a beautiful landscape which has trees, flowers, and birds.
See you next Monday.
>> CORRECT
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