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Please answer the question:
What kinds of food would you recommend to a tourist who would visit your country for the first time?

If my foreign friend comes to Korea for a trip and goes to a restaurant, I want to introduce
the charm of Korean food.
First of all, Korean's has two kinds of food room.
This mean is Korean has room for main food and room for dessert.
The food recommended as a main food is 떡갈비[(Tteok-gal-bi), (Grilled Short Rib Patties)].
This food is made with minced beef and soy sauce.
The Korean pronunciation of rice cake is "Tteok"
And "Gal_bi" means beef dish.
So, It's similar to Korea style rice cake this food became "떡갈비(Tteok-gal-bi)".
It's looks like a buger patty or hamburg steak.
Next on I recommend dessert food is 닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong).
닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong) is boneless fried chicken with seasoned sauce.
In fact, already many similar food in many countries.
But, some people have difficult eat Korean food.
So, I introduced easy food to eat.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Please answer the question:
What kinds of food would you recommend to a tourist who would visit your country for the first time?

If my foreign friend comes to Korea for a trip and goes to a restaurant, I want to introduce the charm of Korean food.
>> CORRECT!
First of all, Korean's has two kinds of food room.
>> First of all, Koreans have two kinds of food rooms.
This mean is Korean has room for main food and room for dessert.
>> This means Koreans have a room for the main course and a room for desserts.
The food recommended as a main food is 떡갈비[(Tteok-gal-bi), (Grilled Short Rib Patties)].
>> CORRECT!
This food is made with minced beef and soy sauce.
>> CORRECT!
The Korean pronunciation of rice cake is "Tteok", and "Galbi" means beef dish.
>> CORRECT!
So, It's similar to Korea style rice cake this food became "떡갈비(Tteok-gal-bi)".
>> So, It's similar to the Korean-style rice cake, and this food became "떡갈비(Tteok-gal-bi)".
It's looks like a buger patty or hamburg steak.
>> It's looks like a burger patty or a hamburger steak.
OR >> It's similar to a burger patty or a hamburger steak.
Next on I recommend dessert food is 닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong).
>> The next food that I recommend is 닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong).
닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong) is boneless fried chicken with seasoned sauce.
>> 닭강정(Chicken-gang-jeong) is a boneless fried chicken with seasoned sauce.
In fact, already many similar food in many countries.
>> In fact, many Korean food already have similar food in other countries.
But, some people have difficult eat Korean food.
>> But, some people have difficulty in eating Korean food.
OR >> Some people find it difficult to eat Korean food.
So, I introduced easy food to eat.
>> CORRECT!
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