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My bucket list

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I forgot my bucket list so I make a list again.
First, I would like to see an aurora in New Zeleand. When I have been to New Zealend It was summer so I could not see it. And I love New Zealend because I have many good memories from studying English in there. I hope to go there again.
Secoundlly, I want to do skydiving once. I heared that It feels like 'reborn'. I hope to feel it.

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Good afternoon, Thomas!

Writing your bucket list once again means that you had great adventures in the past and they made you feel so alive more than ever. Since you are young and full of life, you can make more money to go to places that can give you the best memories in your life.

Your bucket list is spectacular! It makes me want to make mine and make them come true soon. Life is short, so many people say. We have to go out there and see the world.

I appreciate your effort in writing down longer and very meaningful answers. You did excellent in expressing your message here on this homework answer.

I will see you soon.

-T. Donna~

I forgot my bucket list so I make a list again.
>> I forgot my bucket list so I made a list again.

First, I would like to see an aurora in New Zeleand. 
>> Correct!

When I have been to New Zealend It was summer so I could not see it. 
>> Correct! 
Or: When I have been to New Zealand, it was summer so I could not see it. 

And I love New Zealend because I have many good memories from studying English in there. 
>> And I love New Zealand because I have many good memories from studying English there

I hope to go there again.
>> Correct!

Secoundlly, I want to do skydiving once. 
>> Correct!
Or: Secondly

I heared that It feels like 'reborn'. 
>> I heard that It feels like being 'reborn'. 

I hope to feel it.
>> Correct!
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