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HOMEWORK for 07/19
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What form of public transport do you usually use? What can you say about it? Is it expensive or cheap? Do you like taking it?

I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. Our city's subway is have been developed to seoul. Its price is not bad. I like use to subway in summer because its cool.

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Good morning, Min Seog! I'm always grateful with your hard work in answering the homework I'm giving you. I'm happy with the progress that you show everytime you share your ideas like this. Let's continue doing more activities that will make your skills even better in the future. See you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. 
>> I usually use the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
>> OR I usually take the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
Our city's subway is have been developed to seoul. 
>> Our city's subway has been developed, and is now connected to Seoul.
Its price is not bad. 
>> CORRECT 
I like use to subway in summer because its cool.
>> I like to use the subway because it's cool. 
>> OR I like to ride the subway because it's cool. 
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