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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Does coffee affect your appetite?

In my experience, I think it's affect is half and half.
I like sweet or creamy coffee rather than bitter coffee.
My favorite types of coffee are cappuccino and cafe latte.
As a result, these kinds of coffee have a high calories and sometimes I felt olily(greasy) tasty.
So, after drink these coffee, I don't well eat other foods.
On the contrary, when I drinking bitter tasty coffee like a black coffee or cold brew.
I eat with other sweet foods, like a donuts, sweet snacks because to erase the bitter taste form coffee.
Actually, I think this is why I don't lose weight.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Does coffee affect your appetite?


In my experience, I think it's affect is half and half.
>> In my experience, I think it's effect is half and half.
I like sweet or creamy coffee rather than bitter coffee.
>> CORRECT!
My favorite types of coffee are cappuccino and cafe latte.
>> CORRECT!
As a result, these kinds of coffee have a high calories and sometimes I felt olily(greasy) tasty.
>> As a result, these kinds of coffee have high calories and sometimes I feel the greasy aftertaste.
So, after drink these coffee, I don't well eat other foods.
>> So, after drinking these kinds of coffee, I don't eat other food well.
On the contrary, when I drinking bitter tasty coffee like a black coffee or cold brew.
I eat with other sweet foods, like a donuts, sweet snacks because to erase the bitter taste form coffee.
>> On the contrary, when I drink bitter-tasting coffee like black coffee or cold-brewed coffee,
I eat it with other sweet food like donuts and other sweet snacks because it removes the bitter taste form coffee.
Actually, I think this is why I don't lose weight.
>> CORRECT!
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