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Hello, T.Faith.
How was your day?
Since my last daughter Megan's fever disappeared, my wife and I could go to the movie.
"Mission Impossible" was amazing.
We really enjoyed watching the film together.
After that, we had a "Naeng-Myeon" for lunch.
It's a kind of cold noodle.
Have you ever tried one?
We picked up coffees in the new coffee shop which one of my friend started.
The coffee shop had no staff, and we could get a coffee with self-service.
I heard that this kind of shop, which doesn't need a staff, has been popular these days.
That's because the price can be decreased, instead of staff salary.
Fortunately, the taste of coffee was so good, so I didn't need to lie to my friend.
As for my assignment, I totally support the sentence.
When we visit a new place, we should get used to its culture.
If we don't agree with that, we should not go anywhere.
Each of person, country, and land have their own customs and traditions.
We have to respect those things.
What about you?
See you soon.

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That's good news, Dr. Kim! I am glad you were able to enjoy your day off and your daughter recovered from her sickness. We are on the same page on the acceptance of cultural diversity.-Faith-
Hello, T.Faith.
>> Hello, T. Faith.
How was your day?
>> CORRECT
Since my last daughter Megan's fever disappeared, my wife and I could go to the movie.
>> Since my youngest daughter's, Megan, fever disappeared, my wife and I could go to the movie.
"Mission Impossible" was amazing.
>> CORRECT
We really enjoyed watching the film together.
>> CORRECT
After that, we had a "Naeng-Myeon" for lunch.
>> After that, we had naeng-myeon for lunch.
It's a kind of cold noodle.
>> CORRECT
Have you ever tried one?
>> CORRECT
We picked up coffees in the new coffee shop which one of my friend started.
>> We picked up coffees in the new coffee shop which one of my friends started.
The coffee shop had no staff, and we could get a coffee with self-service.
>> CORRECT
I heard that this kind of shop, which doesn't need a staff, has been popular these days. 
That's because the price can be decreased, instead of staff salary.
>> I heard that this kind of shop, which doesn't need a staff, has been popular these days because the price can be decreased, instead of the staff salary.
OR Shops that have no staff have gained popularity these days because owners can save more from their staff salary.
Fortunately, the taste of coffee was so good, so I didn't need to lie to my friend.
>> Fortunately, the taste of the coffee was so good, so I didn't need to lie to my friend.
As for my assignment, I totally support the sentence.
>> CORRECT
When we visit a new place, we should get used to its culture.
>> CORRECT
If we don't agree with that, we should not go anywhere.
>> CORRECT
Each of person, country, and land have their own customs and traditions.
>> CORRECT
We have to respect those things.
>> CORRECT
What about you?
>> CORRECT
See you soon.
>> CORRECT
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