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Q: Do you take vitamins? Do they really help people, or do they just have a placebo effect?
A: I don¡¯t take vitamins now. But last week, I was test-taker, so I had eaten vitamins. I believe that they help people because during my test-taker period, I feel better thanks to the vitamins. But now, I don¡¯t take vitamins just for the reason laziness. However, I also think It can be the placebo effect. But how about is it really placebo effect? If placebo effect can give us the hope and the bravery for survival, then It doesn¡¯t matter whether it is placebo effect.

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Hi, Hyeon Min!
Thank you for doing your homework. You are right, whether it is a placebo effect or not, what matters is we believed in it so we were able to do better because of it. 
- T. Caitlyn
I don¡¯t take vitamins now. But last week, I was test-taker, so I had eaten vitamins. 
>> I don't take vitamins now but last week, I was a test-taker, so I was taking vitamins.
I believe that they help people because during my test-taker period, I feel better thanks to the vitamins. 
>> I believe that vitamins help people because, during my test-taking period, I feel better thanks to them.
But now, I don¡¯t take vitamins just for the reason laziness. 
>> But now, I don¡¯t take vitamins just out of laziness.
However, I also think it can be the placebo effect. 
>> CORRECT
But how about is it really placebo effect? 
>> But does it matter if it's really placebo effect?
If placebo effect can give us the hope and the bravery for survival, then It doesn¡¯t matter whether it is placebo effect.
>> If the placebo effect can give us hope and bravery for survival, then it doesn't matter whether it is a placebo effect.
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