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Hello. T.Faith.
The rain stopped.
Since I have a convertible car and I always want to open the roof of my car, I like a good weather.
Maybe I can enjoy driving without the roof of my car on my way home this evening.
Tomorrow is my day off after a long time.
Thus, I planned to go to the movie with my wife.
I booked the film "Mission impossible"; new siries.
I am looking forward to the time.
Meanwhile, I think that the current young generation has an excessive sensibility.
They always try to chase a trend and get many informations from the online mostly.
Meanwhile, they tend to complain so easily, so I am always wary to young patients.
Of course, we need a change to develop ourselves, nevertheless, we also should respect traditional customs.
Hence, I am always trying to be flexible to both of old and new cultures.
Would you mind if I ask which hobby you have?
It's important to restore our energy, I am sure.
If you are okay, I want to know more about you.
See you tomorrow.

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May you always enjoy your ride, Dr. Kim! I am sure you will have a great time during your movie date with your wife. I do not mind sharing about my hobbies because honestly, I just do indoor activities most of the time such as reading books, watching meaningful videos online, and basic video editing. However, when I visit my mother in our hometown, I always make time to go for a walk because it is in the countryside. See you later!-Faith-
Hello. T.Faith.
>> Hello, T. Faith!
The rain stopped.
>> CORRECT
Since I have a convertible car and I always want to open the roof of my car, I like a good weather.
>> Since I have a convertible car, and I always want to open the roof of it, I like a good weather.
Maybe I can enjoy driving without the roof of my car on my way home this evening.
>> Maybe, I can enjoy driving without the roof of my car on my way home this evening.
Tomorrow is my day off after a long time.
>> Fortunately, tomorrow is my day off after a long time.
Thus, I planned to go to the movie with my wife.
>> CORRECT
I booked the film "Mission impossible"; new siries.
>> I booked the film, Mission: Impossible-Dead Reckoning Part 1.
I am looking forward to the time.
>> I am looking forward to that time.
Meanwhile, I think that the current young generation has an excessive sensibility.
>> CORRECT
They always try to chase a trend and get many informations from the online mostly.
>> They always try to chase a trend and get much information online mostly.
Meanwhile, they tend to complain so easily, so I am always wary to young patients.
>> Meanwhile, they tend to complain so easily, so I am always wary of young patients.
Of course, we need a change to develop ourselves, nevertheless, we also should respect traditional customs.
>> CORRECT
Hence, I am always trying to be flexible to both of old and new cultures.
>> Hence, I am always trying to be flexible to both old and new cultures.
Would you mind if I ask which hobby you have?
>> CORRECT
It's important to restore our energy, I am sure.
>> CORRECT
If you are okay, I want to know more about you.
>> If it is okay, I want to know more about you.
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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