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HOMEWORK for 07/14
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you usually do in a family gathering? How often do you gather together? Where and when do you gather? How do you feel about attending family gatherings?

Our family usually catch up each other and maybe we are gathering twice a year in Our grandmother and grandfather's house.
I feel good but a litle awkward

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Good day, Min Seog! As always, I am thankful for your hard work in answering this homework. You always do your best in sharing your ideas about different topics. Let's continue to talk about various topics and study in class again next time. See you! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
Our family usually catch up each other and maybe we are gathering twice a year in Our grandmother and grandfather's house.
>> Our family usually catch up with each other.
>> Maybe we gather twice a year in our grandmother and grandfather's house.
I feel good but a litle awkward.
>> I feel good but also feel a little awkward. 
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