¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*´Ô
2023-07-17 3631

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

It won¡¯t be familiar to be called first name from my sons.
Our country has a honorific words.
Using the honorific word means respecting.
Children have to feel comfortable to their parents.
And they have to respect them too.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Ms. Sunny!
This is what I admire among Asian nations. we are respectful of people who are older than us. Unlike in the West, younger people can call older people by their first name.  Kind of surprising but it's their culture.
Thank you for your answers.
Aki~


It won¡¯t be familiar to be called first name from my sons.
>>> It is not a familiar way to be called the first name by my sons.

Our country has a honorific words.
>>> Our country has honorific words.

Using the honorific word means respecting.
>>> CORRECT!

Children have to feel comfortable to their parents.
>>> Children have to feel comfortable with their parents.

And they have to respect them too.
>>> CORRECT!

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
129454 Day1 ½Å*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2
129453 Myhomework Àü*¼± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2979
129452 homework Àå*¼® ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2653
129451 7-11 homework. ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 1
129450 How do you get people to listen to your presentation attentively? ±¸*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 0
129449 What\'s your thought on a government that is pro-company? ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2
129448 Sir, my Skype isn\'t working ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3225
129447 Homework ±è*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3907
129446 homework 07.11 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3135
129445 Something that make me happy ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2385
129444 Homework ±è*¶õ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 0
129443 Which city do you want to live in and why? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2358
129442 7/11 homework ÃÖ*º½ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 2827
129441 Homework ±è*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3208
129440 Do you want to be smart or beautiful? Choose one and explain. ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 0
129439 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3193
129438 Time is money. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3527
129437 When and where do you usually eat out? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3162
129436 How do you maintain your mental and physical health? ¹®*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 3
129435 HOMEWORK FOR THE STUDENT: What is your favorite food? Is it... ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-11 8

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04