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It won¡¯t be familiar to be called first name from my sons.
Our country has a honorific words.
Using the honorific word means respecting.
Children have to feel comfortable to their parents.
And they have to respect them too.

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Hi, Ms. Sunny!
This is what I admire among Asian nations. we are respectful of people who are older than us. Unlike in the West, younger people can call older people by their first name.  Kind of surprising but it's their culture.
Thank you for your answers.
Aki~


It won¡¯t be familiar to be called first name from my sons.
>>> It is not a familiar way to be called the first name by my sons.

Our country has a honorific words.
>>> Our country has honorific words.

Using the honorific word means respecting.
>>> CORRECT!

Children have to feel comfortable to their parents.
>>> Children have to feel comfortable with their parents.

And they have to respect them too.
>>> CORRECT!

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