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I think the difference is that Korean barbecue is grilled directly over an open fire, but Amarican barbecue is grilled over smoke.
But the biggest difference is the flavor of amarican bbq, which is tough, while korean bbq is mild.

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I think the difference is that Korean barbecue is grilled directly over an open fire, but Amarican barbecue is grilled over smoke.
>> I think the difference is that Korean barbecue is grilled directly over an open fire, but American barbecue is grilled over smoke.
But the biggest difference is the flavor of amarican bbq, which is tough, while korean bbq is mild.
>> However, the biggest difference is the flavor of American BBQ, which is rich, while Korean BBQ's flavor is mild.
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