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작성자: 김*우
2023-07-11 1287

회원님의 영작문

Good afternoon, T.faith.
I am glad to meet you, too.
The previous teacher helped me improve my English skills well.
At the beginning of the class, we talked about our daily lives and shared many thoughts.
Hence, our progress of the book was somewhat slow, nevertheless , I was so satisfied with the class at all times, because I thought the communication is more important than learning from the book.
As you can guess, I always write my essay with my best.
It is rainy outside, so my clinic was not busy this morning.
Dr. MJ who works with me and I were worried about today's revenue.
I believe that many patients and clients will come this afternoon or tomorrow though.
As for my assignment, it is too difficult for me to spend more time to learn English.
Actually, I hope that I could listen to CNN and read many papers someday.
Also, I hope that I could talk in English as if I am a native speaker just like you.
Lunch time is coming soon.
Have a sumptious lunch and nice day.
See you tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I can see that you put effort in writing your essay, so I appreciate it Dr, Kim! We will try our best to achieve your goals.-Faith-
Good afternoon, T.faith.
>> CORRECT
I am glad to meet you, too.
>> CORRECT
The previous teacher helped me improve my English skills well.
>> CORRECT
At the beginning of the class, we talked about our daily lives and shared many thoughts.
>> CORRECT
OR At the beginning of the class, we talked about our everyday lives and exchanged our notions.
Hence, our progress of the book was somewhat slow, nevertheless , I was so satisfied with the class at all times, because I thought the communication is more important than learning from the book.
>> Hence, our progress of the book was somewhat slow, nevertheless, I was so satisfied with the class at all times because I thought communication is more important than learning from the book.
As you can guess, I always write my essay with my best.
>> As you can guess, I always write my essay with my best.
It is rainy outside, so my clinic was not busy this morning.
>> CORRECT
Dr. MJ who works with me and I were worried about today's revenue.
>> Dr. MJ, who works with me, and I were worried about today's revenue.
I believe that many patients and clients will come this afternoon or tomorrow though.
>> CORRECT
As for my assignment, it is too difficult for me to spend more time to learn English.
>> CORRECT
Actually, I hope that I could listen to CNN and read many papers someday.
>> Actually, I hope that I can listen to CNN and read many news articles someday.
OR Actually, I hope that I can listen to CNN and read many materials someday.
Also, I hope that I could talk in English as if I am a native speaker just like you.
>> Also, I hope that I can talk in English as if I am a native speaker just like you.
Lunch time is coming soon.
>> CORRECT
Have a sumptious lunch and nice day.
>> Have a sumptuous lunch and nice day.
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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