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Hello, Seon U! ^^
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See you in our next class! :)

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I think having few close friends is better than having many friends. 
>>> CORRECT!

We can care our friends more. 
>>> We can care for our friends more. 

But, having many friends can help us. 
>>> CORRECT!

If we need help, we can ask our friends to help.
>>> CORRECT!
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