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HOMEWORK for 07/10
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: How do your prepare when you travel?

when I go to travel I packing a week ago and I take care that i forgot

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Good morning, Min Seog. As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this homework today. Let's continue working hard in order for you to construct more meaningful sentences as your answers. Take care! ~ T. Marie ^^
when I go to travel I packing a week ago and I take care that i forgot
>> When I travel, I pack one week in advanced. 
>> I take care of the things that I usually forget. 
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