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I made the sentence that you have fixed my wrong sentence.
I don¡¯t mind my friend has the same bag that I have.
I forgot you told me yesterday.
They have several colors of that bag.
There are different colors of that shoes.

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Great morning, Sunny!
Yes and thank you for diligently doing your homework, this provides you additional insight and ways on how to write and make your sentences correctly. Enjoy the day and its benefits!
T. Aki~

I made the sentence that you have fixed my wrong sentence.
>>> I made the sentence that you have fixed.

I don¡¯t mind my friend has the same bag that I have.
>>>  CORRECT!

I forgot you told me yesterday.
>>>  CORRECT!

They have several colors of that bag.
>>>  CORRECT!

There are different colors of that shoes.
>>>  There are different colors of those shoes.


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