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Q: Do you think school trips are good for students¡¯ relationships? Why?
A: I think school trip can be good for students' relationship.
If the students all do a lot of things together in the school trip, they can make their memories, and that can make their relationship better.
But if they do not do things together, that can't make relationship better.

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A: I think school trip can be good for students' relationship. If the students all do a lot of things together in the school trip, they can make their memories, and that can make their relationship better. But if they do not do things together, that can't make relationship better.
>>I think school trips can be good for students' relationships. If students do a lot of things together on school trips, they can make memories, and that can make their relationship better. But if they do not do things together, it can't make their relationship better.
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