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Which chores do you not like to do?

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I and wife are doing together after dividing chores to do. Although we divided chores but I really don't like to sort a garbage and dump food trash. In our country, it is being forced to recycle before we dump our garbage. Besides our apartment society often check and inspect whether recycle is going well and even they oversee it. So before we dump our life garbage, we have to check very well the condition of recycle. Sometimes these things put pressure on me. So that is the first reason why I don't like sorting garbage.
The second is dump food trash. Nowadays, by the high temperature, food trash stink all around my house when I prepare to dump that.
If I have enough money for food waste disposal cycler, I will buy about it as soon as possible.

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Hello Kyong Ho!
Thanks for the time and effort you spent in answering today's composition question. I agree with you and I also think this is one of the worst chores a person can do. Anyway, it was fun reading the composition. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I and wife are doing together after dividing chores to do.
>>I and my wife do chores together after dividing them.
Although we divided chores but I really don't like to sort a garbage and dump food trash. 
>>Although we divided the chores, I really don't like to sort the garbage and dump food trash. 
In our country, it is being forced to recycle before we dump our garbage.
>>In our country, it is mandatory to recycle before we dump our garbage.
Besides our apartment society often check and inspect whether recycle is going well and even they oversee it. 
>>Besides, our apartment society often checks and inspects whether the recycling is going well and even they oversee it. 
So before we dump our life garbage, we have to check very well the condition of recycle. 
>>So before we dump our daily garbage, we have to check very well if the recycling was done properly. 
Sometimes these things put pressure on me. 
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: These things put me in a lot of pressure. 
So that is the first reason why I don't like sorting garbage.
>>CORRECT!
The second is dump food trash. 
>>The second is dumping food trash. 
Nowadays, by the the high temperature, food trash stinks all around my house when I prepare to dump that.
>>Nowadays, because of the high temperature, food trash stinks up my whole house while I prepare to dump that.
If I have enough money for food waste disposal cycler, I will buy about it as soon as possible.
>>If I have enough money for food waste disposal cycler, I will buy it as soon as possible.
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