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ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What kind of traditional experience can tourist try in Busan?

people who come in Busan, must go market.
Especially, markets in there have special thing that other cities don't have.
there is the 'Jung' which is a love for other people.
Maybe, Jung makes you happy with various method.
Sometimes, You are given bonus sales people, and sometimes are given discount chance!
So, if you went to Busan, Please go marketplace.

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Thank you for this Lee. It sounds like a good pace to visit. I would definitely want to go there and explore the marketplace.

people who come in Busan, must go market.
>>> People who come in Busan, must go to the market.  
Especially, markets in there have special thing that other cities don't have.
>>> Especially, the markets in there have special things that other cities don't have.   
there is the 'Jung' which is a love for other people.
>>>  There is the 'Jung' which means love for other people.
Maybe, Jung makes you happy with various methods.
>>>   correct
Sometimes, you are given bonus sales people, and sometimes are given discount chance!
>>> Sometimes, you are given bonus sales by some people, and sometimes are given a discount!  
So, if you went to Busan, Please go marketplace.
>>>   So, if you go to Busan, please go to the marketplace.
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