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Q: What do you think are most people worried about these days and what advice are you likely to give them?
A: I think most people worried about money these day. I likely give them advice to do not waste money. "Always remeber save".

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Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie


Q: What do you think are most people worried about these days and what advice are you likely to give them?
A: I think most people worried about money these day. 
>> I think most people worry about money these days.
I likely give them advice to do not waste money. "Always remeber save".
>> I would like to give them advice to not waste money and always remember to save some.
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