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I don't usually like writing. But I write when I have to memorize something or write it down

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Hi Jeny,

I want to express my gratitude and appreciation for completing your homework. It was a pleasant surprise to see your work submitted, and I am genuinely happy to see your active participation. I know that writing isn't something you usually enjoy, but I appreciate that you understand its importance when it comes to remembering things and writing them down. Your willingness to do these tasks shows that you're committed to learning and remembering information. Keep up the good work and keep challenging yourself. If you ever need help or have any questions, just let me know. I'm here to support you. Thank you again, and I'm excited to see how you continue to grow!

~Teacher Cathy


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