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HOMEWORK for 07/06
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: How often do you go to the gym, and what exercises do you do there?


I usually go to gym twice a week and i exercise what a squart and push up and many other axercisr

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Hello, Min Seog! Thank you so much for always doing your best not just in the class but also in answering your homework. I'm really thankful for that. Let's continue to study in our class. See you! ^^ ~ T. Marie 
I usually go to gym twice a week and i exercise what a squart and push up and many other axercisr
>> I usually go to the gym twice a week. 
>> I do some squats, push up, and many other exercises. 
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