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About secondhand clothes

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2023-07-06 2074

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I think there are many good benifits with secondhand clothes.
One of benifits is the price. Of couse It is cheaper than new one. You can easily find reasonable price clothes for high quality.
And You can also find out unique item like to be discontinued.
But in my case, I can not easy to find right size from the secondhand clothes, even the new clothes, because my body size is not that close to standard figures.

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Hi, Thomas! Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the effort in learning and practicing English.

-Joy ^^

 I think there are many good benifits with secondhand clothes.

>> I think there are many good benefits with secondhand clothes.

One of benifits is the price.

>> One of the benefits is the price.

 Of couse It is cheaper than new one.

>> Of course, it is cheaper than a new one.

 You can easily find reasonable price clothes for high quality.

>> You can easily find clothes of high quality at a reasonable price.

And You can also find out unique item like to be discontinued.

>> And you can also find unique items that are discontinued.

But in my case, I can not easy to find right size from the secondhand clothes, even the new clothes, because my body size is not that close to standard figures.

>> But in my case, I cannot easily find the right size from the secondhand clothes, even with new clothes, because my body size is not that close to standard figures.

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