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I think someone can steal my identity over the Internet.

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I think someone might steal my identity.
There are many cases where you can't get caught even if you commit many crimes on the Internet.
Therefore, I am more sensitive to Internet etiquette or Internet crime.
So I think someone can steal my identity over the Internet.

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Hi Da Hye,

I understand your concern about the possibility of someone stealing your identity online. It's important to be cautious and protect yourself on the Internet. There are cases where people can commit crimes without getting caught, so it's natural to be sensitive to internet etiquette and online crime. While there is a risk of identity theft online, there are measures you can take to safeguard your personal information. Stay vigilant, use strong passwords, avoid sharing sensitive details online, and be wary of suspicious emails or websites. If you suspect your identity has been stolen, take immediate action by reporting it to the authorities and contacting your bank or credit card company. Being proactive and mindful of online security can help reduce the risk of identity theft.

~Teacher Cathy

               

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OR>>I think someone might be able to steal my identity.

There are many cases where you can't get caught even if you commit many crimes on the Internet.

>>Even if you commit many crimes on the Internet, you don¡¯t always get caught.

Therefore, I am more sensitive to Internet etiquette or Internet crime.

>>That being the case, I¡¯m more sensitive to Internet etiquette or Internet crime.

So I think someone can steal my identity over the Internet.

>>So, I think someone can steal my identity over the Internet.

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