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What is your favorite beverage?

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My favorite beverage is orange juice,apple juice and grape juice.
Orange juice is very sweet and yummy.
And Apple juice is sweet and my favorite color is red.
And grage juice is so yummy.
Thses are my favorite beverare.

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Hi Henry!

Happy Wednesday ^^

T. DON

My favorite beverage is orange juice,apple juice and grape juice.
Orange juice is very sweet and yummy.
And Apple juice is sweet and my favorite color is red.
And grage juice is so yummy.
Thses are my favorite beverare.

>> My favorite beverages are orange juice, apple juice and grape juice. Orange juice is very sweet and yummy. Apple juice is sweet and my favorite color is red. And grape juice is so yummy. These are my favorite beverages.
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