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ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What is the best thing about your birth place?

My hometown is Busan, in Korea.
It is famous for East sea we called Donghea.
In this place, i can eat seafood such as sushi, Maeuntang, and aguijjim.
especially, There is seafood market, Jagalchi.
So, my birth place's best thing is seafood.

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Thank you for this Lee. Wow, seafood! I don't have many chances to eat seafood since I live on top of a mountain. I'll definitely enjoy seafood to my heart and stomach's content if I ever get to visit Busan someday.

My hometown is Busan in Korea.
>>> correct
>>> OR:  My hometown is in Busan, Korea. 
It is famous for East sea we called Donghea.
>>>   It is famous for East sea which we call Donghea.
>>> OR: It is famous for East sea which is called Donghea.
In this place, I can eat seafood such as sushi, Maeuntang, and aguijjim.
>>> correct  
especially, There is seafood market, Jagalchi.
>>>  Especially, there is a seafood market called Jagalchi. 
So, my birth place's best thing is seafood.
>>>  correct 
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