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Why is kindness so powerful?

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I guess it's a karma. That's why the kindness is so powerful. If you acted unkindly and rudely, that would come back to you. But on the contrary, if you acted kindly and politely, that would do to you. So, I always tend to say to my friends who are rude. "You have to become more polite than now because if you do the same because the other person is being rude, you'll be the same person. Right?" :)

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Wonderful Wednesday to you, Elic! You are more than capable of accomplishing more than you could ever imagine. With determination, persistence, and hard work, anything can be possible. You are awesome!


I guess it's a karma.
>>> I guess it's karma.

That's why the kindness is so powerful. 
>>> That's why kindness is so powerful.

If you acted unkindly and rudely, that would come back to you.
>>> CORRECT.

But on the contrary, if you acted kindly and politely, that would do to you. 
>>> But on the contrary, if you acted kindly and politely, that would do you good.

So, I always tend to say to my friends who are rude.
>>> So, I always tend to say that to my friends who are rude.

 "You have to become more polite than now because if you do the same because the other person is being rude, you'll be the same person.
>>> You have to become more polite than now because if you do the same because the other person is being rude, you'll be the same person.

Right?
>>> CORRECT.

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