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The advantages of using public transport

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2023-07-05 1761

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There are two advantages of using public transport.
First, Using public transport is able to reduce pollution. If all people who using public transport use thier own vehicle The vehicle will make more than hunderd times greenhouse gases. It is not included flowing pollution from traffic jam.
Secondary, It is more convenient than driving by myself. I can do other things such as reading books, watching movies and videos during the transport time. And I can drink when I hang out with my friends If I use public transport.
To reduce pollution and convenient are the benefit of using public transport.

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Hi, Thomas! Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the good work!

-Joy^^

There are two advantages of using public transport.

>> Correct.
First, Using public transport is able to reduce pollution.

>> First, using public transport reduces pollution.

If all people who using public transport use thier own vehicle The vehicle will make more than hunderd times greenhouse gases.

>> If everyone who takes public transport starts using their own vehicles, the amount of greenhouse gases produced will increase by over a hundred times.

It is not included flowing pollution from traffic jam.

>> It does not include the pollution caused by traffic jams.
Secondary, It is more convenient than driving by myself.

>> Secondly, it is more convenient than driving by myself.

I can do other things such as reading books, watching movies and videos during the transport time.

>>I can do other activities such as reading books, watching movies, and videos during the commute.

And I can drink when I hang out with my friends If I use public transport.

>> Additionally, I can have a drink when hanging out with my friends if I use public transport.
To reduce pollution and convenient are the benefit of using public transport.

>> The benefits of using public transport include reducing pollution and convenience.

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