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What word of advice do you have for your son so that he can be encouraged to attend his classes?

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2023-07-05 1924

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First of all, I totally understand him because I am also on a tough journey like him. In order to overcome this situation, I want him to enjoy during the class as much as possible. He doesn't need to pay attention to studying and something they have to, since he did not study here during last semester. And then, there are many playing times after lunch such as basketball and soccer. Thankfully, he learned about those sports in SK , so I recommend he just has to play those games with his classmates without burden and fear in English.
Above all, I trust him and I know his nature. He will overcome this time with positive thinking. Besides, as a mom, I always pray for him to God.

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Good evening from Asia, Jane!

Congratulations for perfectly composing every sentence here on your homework answer!

All the challenges, struggles, and difficulties that you are encountering right now as a family is indescribable. Yet, you are moving so steadily strong. In this journey, your family is all you need.

Your son is very lucky to have you and your husband as his best supporters. When the time is right, all of you will be living your lives in peace and harmony in New York.

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

First of all, I totally understand him because I am also on a tough journey like him. 
>> Correct!

In order to overcome this situation, I want him to enjoy during the class as much as possible. 
>> Correct!

He doesn't need to pay attention to studying and something they have to, since he did not study here during last semester. 
>> Correct!

And then, there are many playing times after lunch such as basketball and soccer. 
>> Correct!

Thankfully, he learned about those sports in SK , so I recommend he just has to play those games with his classmates without burden and fear in English.
>> Correct!
Or: Thankfully, he learned about those sports in SK , so I recommended that he just has to play those games with his classmates without a burden and fear in English.

Above all, I trust him and I know his nature. 
>> Correct!

He will overcome this time with positive thinking. 
>> Correct!

Besides, as a mom, I always pray for him to God.
>> >> Correct!
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